Sunday, September 22, 2013

Nails it!

Sometimes the authors I read just nail a description that I have never been able to put into words.


Try this from Nevada Barr in Liberty Falling:

Cloaked in darkness, the world was utterly changed. A supreme gentleness personified eastern summer nights that, living so long in the West, she'd forgotten. A kindly, dreamlike quality that the sharp dry air of Colorado could not emulate. Two floating sparks caught her attention and she laughed in delight. Ellis Island had fireflies. Fireflies put her in mind of Tinkerbell and she wanted to clap because she believed.









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